basketball19435
First of all your story has an awesome concept and I would love for you to continue! Second I would love to help you write it in more of a story format with dialogue like using quotation marks and that kind of stuff. Third again I love this concept I will definitely continue reading it once it's updated!
~Syd
Sammy_100
@SWEETNSEVEN thank you so much. I am sorry if I don't I am trying to keep the concept. at the same time I am having a lot of family problems. and also problems with my boyfriend. I will defiantly try my hardest. and once again thanks for your feed back