Sandhya_sss

wheeeennn are you gonna make the story I requested Youuuuuuu wahhhhh  I badlyyy wanna reeeaddd itttt !!

hi sunshine.....i guess what i sent you was not your cup of tea....

holiday week ....4 of july weekend here in the united states people will be out partying all week ....that can affect your numbers

hun....you can have sidhur lead the raid against suh for revenge for dipali and his family.  this would clear the way for sachin and nidhi to get married and uday take over sud company.....just food for thought....create high drama...and intreage......tasha

sorry hun....i went off on the wild side again on my last message,,,,use it how your heart desires....tasha

Ok Sunshine,  here you go ...this according to my point of view....your story has been doing well ….but it is kind of fading...after the love shower it sort of dropped. It need a couple more romantic seen later....it is like sudhir gave up and dipali it doing it all to keep the romance going.   My fix ...the shot in the arm ….nothing sell like sex and vilance...bullition points.... (1) the lull before the shit storm (your story as of now) 
          (2-a)... the shit storm.... (2-b) ..sudhir car blows up, he is banged up good some hair singed, sore but ok, (2-c) ….some one runs sachin off the road on his motorcycle, he has a broke leg and wrist,...(2-d)...vinay is shot in his arm before they run him off the road,......
          (2-e).....dipali is mugged and beaten very badly almost critical care..but will not have any surface scares but emotional one of insecurity...(2-f)...an attempt to burn Goenka warehouse but it was stopped...(3-a)...  radhika hear about the attack and rushes in to help take care of her friend at all cost with help from  pramod & sheetal step in to take of dipali and to help guide sudhir emotionally to help keep him level minded.....they also help sudhir under stand about being with a trans woman....(3-b)...aryan steps in and helps run the business till sudhir get back on his feet again and (3-c) ...aryan bring his securety force in to help back up vinay security....(4-a)....they learn that when mahesh sah found about sachin and nidhi were planning to get married, he decided to get kill all of sudhir goenka family, friends, company.......and vivek was feeding information to him on everything for revenge.  Sudhir realized that he almost lost dipali and decides to marry her so he can protect her.  This whole shit storm brought both companys together in a tight solid contacts and familys bonded into one big tight family....tasha

Hi Sandhya,
          
          I think you are upset with me, if so, please let me know my mistake. I loved reading your stories and thank you for considering me as the main character in your story.
          
          I look forward to your reply.
          
          Your desperate reader
          Dipali 

hi sunshine....15 time i tried to write some thing in the comments.  it would crash everytime it got over 145 thrid party cookies blocked.  one time it went to 188.  when i came to you conversation page it blocked 209....this is crazy...and it can afect the amount of comments that you get.  if a person want to post a comment and after it crashes 5 time may just quit trying .

hi sunsunshine......just let me know if when you need me to tweek  my brain on some some different point of views for you...  untill then i am focused on rebuilding a 34 year old,  & a 56 year old ford wreckers, & 58 year old rollback wrecker trucks as hobbies.....i know, i know, it is not the girly thing to do and it is ruff on manicured nails...it keeps me out of trouble...some times...lol

hi sunshine.....i was wondering if the idea that i sent you dipali taking care of sudhir would appear in this story or if you was saving for a different story later on...just pondering