Sandhya_sss

New book announcement!!!!
          	
          	
          	Hi Readers, I am working on a new book and will be publishing on monday so please give it a read...
          	
          	The story is an age-gap love story and the main character's name was suggested by one of my readers... 
          	
          	Similarly you guys can also suggest your character's name that you want included in the books.

sweething69

@Sandhya_sss i need to prof read it before i sent it , i think faster than i type.
          	  i have adhd and i tend to transpose word sometimes, that is why i never write anything if i can help it.  all my life, on a normal day, i will have 20 to 30 thing running threw my brain at the same time...it take a lot of energy to just stay focused on just a few.  when tired and stressed, i tend to switch words.  dealing with this and run a busness at the same time become interisting.
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sweething69

@Sandhya_sss Hi Sunshine...i am looking forward to reading it  ...thank you
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bharthi108

@Sandhya_sss waiting for your update.thank you
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sweething69

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Hi sunshine.....  I figure that is where you are going with it being that Sudhir is being so hateful that he is pushing Dipali away into another man's arms.  Then when Sudhir see Dipali being romanced by another man.  It will eat Sudhir alive with jealousy after he finds out that Uday has publicly offered Dipali a higher paying  to come work for him in front of Sudhir.....  now the realization that Sudhir could be losing Dipali all together because Sudhir has been acting like a big asshole.  Now Sudhir realizes that he has to change before he looses Dipali all together....just my thought...tasha

sweething69

hi sunshine ....how is the story going??  looking forward to see where you used some of my thoughts.   if you would like anymore of my offbeat thinking, drop me a line any time....i love puzzels and human realtionships are the best.
          tasha

Sandhya_sss

@sweething69 I am actually working on the storyline you suggested.. just trying to fit in on the plot points... Its a great way to bring both of them closer without ruinign their characters
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sweething69

ok....sunshine....to me it just seam a simple way to tie every thing...
          i just felt this was a way vinay could push these people forward 
          to either fix everything to move on with their lives...
          have fun with it and enjoy....
          no you know how this old lady's brain works....lol

sweething69

Hi Sunshine....  I need to apologize to you what I sent  you  parts A,B,C,D....it is a mess and I would not blame you is you threw it in the trash. If you want me to, I will re-write is for a finish polish part that you could use.  
          To explain how and why I messed up.  I do have ADHD (on average 30 different subjects going on at the same time in my mind all the time )   and the Dr has me on a diet pill to lose weight. Have lost 50 lbs in this last year, with 30 lbs more to go.  So so mental, diet pills (speed ) and  no sleep,... the communication between brain and typing tends to become messy and chewed up.
          So..only if you want me to ...i will  re write A,B,C,D...i will rewrite it tonight or tomorrow...to make it a good finish  chapter ...   i am not a writer...it is a mistake to try  and write storys...better off  playing with my old trucks    tasha

Sandhya_sss

@sweething69 No No, it was great!! i will try to incorporate it into the story as much qs possible
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sweething69

Part  D
          To let you know that you getting him lying down and cooling his head down from the swelling has help him more than you know.   Thank you Miss Dipali....you are a life saver, may the God bless you.  On the way out, Vinya asked the Doc, how bad is he?  Mr Vinay, to be honest...he is in a ruff shape. If Miss Dipali had not started cooling his head down quickly, he would had a lot more swelling and possible damage.  I have know Mr Sudhir for a very long time.  If it had not been for his hard head and Dipala cooling him down it could have been real bad.  There is nothing we can do but make him rest and let time heal him with a woman's touch.....Good night Mr Vinya, I will check on him tomorrow.  You need to thank the God for that beautiful you lady in there...if not for her acting quickly it could have been real bad.
          
          You add the part of Sudhir waking up here  .....have fun tasha