VioletGaming69

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VioletGaming69

@Sanic_06 I wouldn't say Tsunami starts off too badass, rather too paranoid, unpredictable. But Glory, yeah, she basically hardly had an arc. Most I can say is she just learned to believe in herself. The Moana Theory, as I called it.
            
            Moana Theory: A character who, in order to win, needs to believe in themselves.
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Sanic_06

@VioletGaming69 Another thing that part makes me think of. Every single book protagonist has a character arc. Tsunami’s and Glory’s start with them being too badass for their own good, while Clay and Starflight’s start with them being too kind/weak for their own good. Gender bias, you think?
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VioletGaming69

@Sanic_06 1. Sunny needed a scar.
            
            2. The girls in the main goods get off scoff free and become royals, while the boys get crippled.
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