I was thinking to myself 'man this writer wrote the best one shot book I've ever seen I should let them know that they are awesome' and then I realized that I already did that
I'm not sure if you're still active or have access to this account but if you do there are a few things I want to say I stumbled on your one shot book and I gotta say the way you wrote killer with ADHD felt real me personally I have ADHD and I could feel the frustration and relate to the struggles of others when it comes to ADHD it's not "OMG I found a squirrel I'm so random XD" it's more like "ok I have to focus focus focus that's a weird word focus Fo-cu-s wait what did they say?" Throughout the whole thing I was screaming "TELL THEM YOU HAVE ADHD!" The memory loss issue is one of my genuine fears that one day I'll wake up and not know anything you know your forgetting something but what? To sum this up you made the caritors feel real and made the problems with ADHD correct and for that I say thank you and awesome book keep writing I hope you are able to publish a book one day