MateoCervantes7

Hola loco, quería ver si querías leer mi nueva historia, tal vez no sea tu estilo porque es muy para adultos con muchos toques de erotimos pero pues ahí te lo doy

Santiald

@ MateoCervantes7  Ola bro, trataré de darle un vistazo, no te preocupes porque sea algo +18 con tal y no sea como otras historias que no lo saben usar, todo bien. Igual te daré mi opinión (y por lo de contenido +18, ten en cuenta que yo también escribo así XD)
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Santiald

Saque una historia, la verdad es random xD
          
          Simplemente es un trabajo de media técnica, pero me gusto tanto que lo adapte bastante xD, así que ahí quedó.
          
          Por si se lo preguntan, se basan en dos canciones, Snuff y Vermilion Part II por si las quieren escuchar. 
          
          Y ya, eso es todo XD

Santiald

Imperfection posiblemente tenga más de 20 partes :v

Subinsuben

@Santiald Thank you. I really appreciate that
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Santiald

@Eternal-CAT Posiblemente si tenga 30 partes, pero esta entre el rango de 20 - 30 partes, sin embargo, esta se queda corta con una historia extra (que puede tener hasta 75 parte XD). Pero me alegra que te vaya gustando la historia, saludos desde el fondo de pulmón derecho <3
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Santiald

@Subinsuben I'm surprised, bro. I usually have a really varied mix of tastes, and finding someone with similar tastes is pretty rare, lol. I wish you luck on your exams, bro, and I hope you do well. When you can, post the story; I'd love to read it.
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Santiald

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Everything sucks and I can prove it
          
          Everybody dies, shuffle on, remove it
          
          Individuals, indispensable
          
          I'm the paradox deity vessel
          
          The other side holds no secret
          
          But this side is done. I don't need it
          
          Before you go, you should know you're breaking down
          
          You'll be rotten by the time you're underground
          
          Fuck you!
          
          
          (No tiene nada que ver con las historias, simplemente son cosas que pienso y no puedo decir).

Eternal-CAT

@ Santiald  y las papitas con queso? 
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Santiald

@Subinsuben I'm glad I'm not the only one xD
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Santiald

Obey (ME!)
          
          Believe (ME!)
          
          Just trust (ME!)
          
          Worship (ME!), 
          
          Live for (ME!)
          
          BE! grateful (now), 
          
          BE! honest (now)
          
          BE! precious (now)
           
          BE! mine (Just love me)
          
          POSSESION!, feed my only vice
          
          CONFESSION!, I won't tell you twice
          
          DECIDE!, either die for me
          
          OR GIVE UP ANY THOUGHT YOU HAD OF BEING FREE!
          
          
          01010011 01101000 01100001 01110010 01101111 01101110 00100000
          
          Imperfection (Act 2)

Santiald

@Subinsuben  Your theory is pretty accurate, however, if you consider the meaning of the song a bit, you might get a better idea of ​​what I mean by this development. But pretty accurate, bro.
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Subinsuben

@Santiald From my own theory, this is a representation of how Hedgehog was taught. She wasn't raised like a normal child, but rather a computer. It is like she was programmed to be perfect
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Santiald

Happy Birthday Chester...

Santiald

@Subinsuben You're absolutely right, bro, absolutely right...
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Subinsuben

@Santiald It's true. We cannot do anything but accept. However, the memories of those who we care about will live inside our heart until we, too, will see them again someday. Until that, we will continue to live on and carry the will of those who went before us
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Santiald

@Subinsuben It's strange, he's gone but remains in our memories, yet his passing is still a blow I haven't gotten over. I truly can't listen to the three-hour tribute without bursting into tears, or hear the last time he sang "One More Light" live without feeling like I'm going to cry uncontrollably. I really miss him, and I'm glad his legacy is remembered every day.
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Santiald

Arco 1 de Imperfection: Fachada
          
          Ella aprendió a sonreír antes de aprender a hablar.
          
          Nadie decía nada sobre las mangas largas en pleno mayo. Nadie preguntaba por qué evitaba los vestidos en verano. Nadie notaba que, cuando se reía, sus ojos miraban siempre hacia abajo.
          
          Ella guardaba sus secretos en el mismo lugar donde guardaba sus moretones: debajo de la ropa, detrás de la piel, en ese rincón del alma donde ya no dolía tanto porque el dolor se había vuelto costumbre.
          
          Imperfection

Subinsuben

@Santiald Thank you so much, bro
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Santiald

@Subinsuben Bro, I'm glad to hear that. It really makes me happy to feel that someone thinks I'm a good writer. :'D
            
            I'll try not to be so inactive. I'm much freer now and can finally rest from all the schoolwork. Again, thanks for your support, bro. Thank you so much.
            
            Good luck on your exams, keep your chin up! <3
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Subinsuben

@Santiald I have to say that you are one of the best summer camp island writters on this platform that I know. Your stories are serious and heavy in a way that make the readers truly feel the emotional weight. I'm really hoping to be able to finish the newest chapter of "Imperfection" since I still have a lot of exams to come. I enjoy every chapter, and your storytelling skills
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Santiald

Gente, pequeño aviso.
          
          Quiero tratar de sacar cap está semana, solo que no tuve tiempo debido a dos sesiones de exámenes que tuve el día de hoy y ayer, ahora que por fin los hice, ya puedo estar en paz un poco.
          
          Así que, tratare de sacar cap :D

Santiald

@ Subinsuben  Wow, I didn't know you were working on one too. I'm glad to hear you've made progress, bro. Like I mentioned, I hope to release a chapter soon, and I might (it's actually quite likely) post something random at any moment; it's just a little surprise.
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Subinsuben

@Santiald Well, glad for you. I have just done mine today though there are still more to come. Glad to hear that there will be a new chapter coming out
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