Hi, I'm just here 'cause I don't truly believe my friends on the story I'm writing and I want the true opinions of you guys so please if you have any constructive criticism on what I could do to improve feel free to leave a comment and tell me :)!
Thank you and I hope you have a great day!
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Story by Saori
The Fine Line
Rosaline was the golden child, one could say she was picture-perfect. She had everything anyone could ask for...
