Saphire_1D

I'm so Srry I just ruined my book the chapters were mixed up Srry for the confusion and for the people who just started reading I'm Srry but everything is good now I fixed it and again so Srry 

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""Did you not forget something!"
          
          "No I don't thi- Oh Shit! We've got to go!"
          
          "You don't say." I said with sarcasm.
          
          "Hey we have no time for that."
          
          He handed my a bag of cloths and pointed in the woods.
          
          " I am not-"
          
          "Look I'm sorry but we have no time." He said.
          
          "Fine." I said
          
          After I changed Zayn did.
          
          We walked out toward the street and got a cab and went home.
          
          When we got to the house Zayn opened the door and paid the driver and ran to the house with me behind.
          
          Before we got to the steps Liam opened the door.
          
          "Thank god you came on time we were going to go look for you." Liam said with relief.
          
          "You guys didn't do anything right?" Harry asked shyly.
          
          "And what if we did." Zayn asked more in like a sentence than a question.
          
          "Then I would! I w-wouldn't even care." Harry said crossing his arms.
          
          "Lets go guys we're going to be late we went into the limo waiting outside.
          
          Luckily we came to the photo shoot on time.
          
          We went into a room with a big mirror and hair stuff on the counter.
          
          "Here boys!" A blond lady yelled
          
          She handed Harry an out fit and pointed to and door.
          
          "Go get dressed." She said.
          
          Then she handed the rest of them their outfits and motioned them to go to different rooms.
          
          Harry came out.
          
          "Where'd the she go?"
          
          "I don't know," I said standing up looking around, "I'll go check if she-."
          
          Harry grabbed my wrist.
          
          "Phoebe."
          
          "Umm Harry could you let go." I said tugging my hand away.
          
          He looked up at me and cupped my face and leaned in for a kiss
          
          "I love you."
          
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          I'm going to leave it at a cliff hanger for the first chapter
          
          Btw this is my first book here on wattpad so please no hate on errors that I have if I've left some in there.
          
          Ill try proofreading.
          
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""I love you more." I replied.
          
          "Wanna bet?" He asked.
          
          I just giggled as he lead me to the blanket laid down on the green grass.
          
          We sat and talked for what seemed like forever.
          
          Zayn stood up and walked over to the shallow river.
          
          I followed.
          
          "What you thinkin' about?" I asked
          
          He just smile and looked at me.
          
          "Did you know that I love you." He asked.
          
          "Of coarse." I said with a smile
          
          "So you won't get mad at me if I do something real quick." Zayn asked putting his on my shoulders.
          
          "Zayn I swear if yo-" before I could finish 
          
          He carried me bridal style and jumped in the river.
          
          "Zayn!" I yelled.
          
          I stood up in the water and looked at Zayn laughing.The water came up a little over my waist.
          
          "I- I'm sorry babe, you want a hug?" He said spreading his arms out to me.
          
          "No! I didn't bring any other cloths to wear!" I yelled.
          
          "I don't mind." Zayn replied with a smirk on his face.
          
          "Shut up! I'm leaving." I said trying to get out of the water.
          
          "Hey babe ok ok look I got you some extra cloths, just have a little fun here. Please." He said giving me his little pouty face.
          
          "Fine." I answered.
          
          "Yaaay!" He yelled.
          
          We stayed in the water for a little while longer until my phone rang.
          
          I got out an went to go answer it.
          
           
          
          P=Phoebe Li=Liam 
          
          L=Louis H=Harry 
          
          N=Niall
          
           
          
          P= Hello?
          
          L= Phoebe!!!
          
          P= Hey Lou what you need.
          
          N= Is that Phoebe?
          
          L= Yep!
          
          N= Where are you guys?!
          
          P= Well we-
          
          L= Oh I get it you guys are having some fun yea.
          
          H= What?! Phoebe and Zayn are-
          
          P= NO! We went on a picnic.
          
          H= Oh good
          
          L= Harry your not fallin'-
          
          H= Shut up Lou!
          
          Li= Hey what going on!
          
          L= It's Phoebe.
          
          Li= Where are you guys?! Did you forget Zayn and us have a photo shoot to attend in 5 minutes.
          
          P= OMG! I'm so sorry we're on our way.
          
          I hung up the phone and picked up my stuff.
          
          "What's wrong?" Zayn asked.
          
          I crossed my arms and gave him a stern look." http://wattpad.com/story/4926118

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""Zayn where are you taking me???" I yelled.
          
          "Wait and you'll see."he replied.
          
          I just kept following him.
          
          "Taxi!!!" Zayn waved his hand in the air trying to get the attention from one of the cabs.
          
          He opened the door and motioned for me to go in.
          
          "Where too." The driver asked.
          
          "Umm just keep driving till I tell you to make a turn." Zayn replied.
          
          "Alright." The driver replied.
          
          Zayn turned towards me.
          
          "Put this on." He said more of a question.
          
          He handed me a blind fold.
          
          "Do I have to." I said giving a pout.
          
          He pouted as well,"Yes you do.", and then smiled.
          
          I put the blindfold.
          
          "Now what?" I asked.
          
          "Now you just wait till we get there." Zayn replied.
          
           
          
          I sat there patiently, thinking about where Zayn was taking me for my 19th birthday.
          
          By the time I was done thinking about it Zayn told the driver too stop.
          
          "Come on Phoebe." Zayn grabbed my hand and guided me out of the car.
          
          "This way Phoebe." After about 5 minutes of walking, Zayn started to untie the blindfold.
          
          The bright light of the sun blinded me for a couple of seconds.
          
          As my eyes started to adjust I could see the beautiful scenery.
          
          There was a small water fall that went on as a small river, and next to it was a picnic set up.
          
          There were trees surrounding us to where there wasn't a lot of sunlight.
          
          "Wow... It's... It's gorgeous." I walked around looking at our surroundings.
          
          "I knew you'd like it!" Zayn replied.
          
          He walked towards me and intertwined our fingers together.
          
          "I'm lucky I have you as my boyfriend." I said.
          
          "No, I should be the lucky one." Zayn replied leaning in for a kiss.
          
          "I love you." He said
          
          "I love you more." I replied.
          
          "Wanna bet?" He asked.
          
          I just giggled as he lead me to the blanket laid down on the green grass." http://wattpad.com/story/4926118