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          	The era of robots has begun...
          	
          	Robots have taken over Earth, which is now called Orb. The only surviving humans are part of a group called Legacy, which resides in Droid. It borders Cyber City, and it was founded a cycle ago. I am Mina, one of the survivors, and I will find a way to restore the beautiful place my mother told me about. The place where something called nature exists, where the gas we breathe is in the sky, and where you don't have to create tasteless food using a machine. I am 14 years old, and I will destroy the Cyborgs that killed my mother.

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@JocelynEquestrian Thank you!!!
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jocelynithink

@SapphireKittyKat 10!
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SapphireKittyKat

How does this description for a book sound? 
          
          Please rate it 0-10
          
          Description: 
          
          The era of robots has begun...
          
          Robots have taken over Earth, which is now called Orb. The only surviving humans are part of a group called Legacy, which resides in Droid. It borders Cyber City, and it was founded a cycle ago. I am Mina, one of the survivors, and I will find a way to restore the beautiful place my mother told me about. The place where something called nature exists, where the gas we breathe is in the sky, and where you don't have to create tasteless food using a machine. I am 14 years old, and I will destroy the Cyborgs that killed my mother.

SapphireKittyKat

@JocelynEquestrian Thank you!!!
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jocelynithink

@SapphireKittyKat 10!
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SapphireKittyKat

Wattpad has reached out to me saying that I am eligible to participate in a horror short story contest. Should I do it?

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Okay, I will. :)
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freezerbrides

Same here, I think you should I did it
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SapphireKittyKat

I have written a few chapters of a new book of mine called Missing. If three different people reply to this message saying I should publish it, I will. What are you waiting for! You better do it now!! You have until 10/30/19, 12am, to submit your vote. Hurry up! I will not accept late votes!!!

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@keyz630 and @MatchaSteam have voted to publish the story. One more vote!
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SapphireKittyKat

Sneak peak: 
            “You did it. I can’t believe it... I never would have guessed.” 
            “Well Walker, looks like I outsmarted you. This time, I’ll have the last word.”
            “You shall never get away with this!”
            “I wouldn’t be too certain. After I finish with you, I can have as much fun as I want with little Ella here. She will be a wonderful addition to my collection. I usually don’t murder women older than fourteen, but I can make an exception for you my sweet Walker.”
            “You crazy psycho! Don’t you dare hurt her!”
            “I will do what I want to do.”
            “Gibbs and Riley will find you.”
            “We’ll see about that.” He said. “Any last words Walker?”
            “Tell the prison guard I said hi.” Walker said.
            
            There you go.
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SapphireKittyKat

Detective Kelly Walker has solved numerous cases concerning things from finding lost watches to solving homicide. Walker works for NYPD, New York Police Department, and receives word from her boss to take on a case in Jannbury, Kansas. Little does Walker know that this could put her job on the line, even her life.
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SapphireKittyKat

Scratch all my stories! I’ll write them later! Right now, I’m really into Halloween and I have a PERFECT story idea! 
          
          History can be forgotten, and so was the story of Katherine Harley. In this retelling of her story, the past shall be remembered. The past will be relived, and the ghosts shall be summoned. Lock all your doors, close all the windows, and be ready because The Haunting is starting.
          
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