@TheMarauder_77 Oh nope it's totally fine!
I wanted a real opinion only, so I'm very glad you gave a real one.
This being my first book, I sure have made certain errors and i know about it, but I'm surely trying to make my chapters as error free as possible.
I'm really trying my best!
Yeah there sure are, but I'll try that my story won't become cliche like the others.
Oh thanks :)
Ah it's alright:) I hope you at least liked it!
Oh and thanks a lot for fanning! It means a lot to me <3