Sapphire_Trainer

It's official. The Unknown Hero rewrite is officially in the works, now titled Key to Shadows! Major changes in the plot and characters are to be expected, especially dynamics and personality. You can find the art and teasers in my tumblr if y'all wanna:
          	
          	https://www.tumblr.com/kit-chat?source=share

Sapphire_Trainer

@Wolfy_bluu It's real, I hope you forgive me for the no ending now HAHAHAHAHA
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Pyro_The_Chaotic

• THE REWRITE!
          	  
          	  • THE REWRITE IS REAL!
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  • I haven't even watched One Piece, I don't why I did this
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Sapphire_Trainer

It's official. The Unknown Hero rewrite is officially in the works, now titled Key to Shadows! Major changes in the plot and characters are to be expected, especially dynamics and personality. You can find the art and teasers in my tumblr if y'all wanna:
          
          https://www.tumblr.com/kit-chat?source=share

Sapphire_Trainer

@Wolfy_bluu It's real, I hope you forgive me for the no ending now HAHAHAHAHA
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Pyro_The_Chaotic

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            • I haven't even watched One Piece, I don't why I did this
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Sapphire_Trainer

The Percy Jackson show is a dogwattery disappointment. I dare say that even though the movies are bad, some scenes are actually accurate to the book and doesn't infuriate me enough to scream at the tv unlike the show dropping unnecessary exposition out of nowhere. 

Wolfy_bluu

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Frfr I didn’t want to continue it. Basically piles of shit beside the godly books 
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Sapphire_Trainer

@Billycorn2002 It infuriated me when the characters just started acting like they knew what the hell is gonna happen. How the hell did they know that the casino is a trap? How did they know when everything is gonna go wrong? 
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Billycorn2002

@Sapphire_Trainer fair. I couldn't finish the show, got 3 episodes in and I was done
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Sapphire_Trainer

Things I might write to if I were to consider a rewrite for the unknown hero:
          
          -Kate not knowing how to fight at first which makes sense because she was not used to her new body
          
          -Change Philip's name
          
          -Would probably remake Lonnie, Blake and Philip 
          
          -Louis (Lonnie's father) would not be abusive to the point where he seemed irredeemable like in the original
          
          -Rewrite Darkrai
          
          -Make the world more close to the explorers of sky universe
          
          -Change the ridiculous hall of guilds to something similar in the games 
          
          What other things should I change?
          
          

Wolfy_bluu

Maybe make Blake more scared of a random eevee in his house. I didn’t read in a loooooong time but he was so chill with Kate being in his house I said out loud “stranger danger”
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Sapphire_Trainer

@Billycorn2002 soooo... I make em bouncy like frogs? :D
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Sapphire_Trainer

I didn't like how I wrote The Unknown Hero, as after reading it again after a few years made me realize how it was poorly done with little to no care. So now I have decided to discontinue it, rewrite the whole thing and maybe publish it here, if it makes it. I'm sorry for dragging it out for years just for it to be discontinued, but things had to be done. So hopefully, we'll meet again for the next rewrite, if I somehow manage to do that. 

Sapphire_Trainer

@Sovereign_of_Dawn Now that I've thought of it, maybe on a03 and the pmd site
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Sovereign_of_Dawn

@Sapphire_Trainer oh ok that's good hope you have a good time!
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DonAndZiNing

Hola. So you mind making a Season 2 rather than rewriting? Because that would be cooler. Looking forward for a Chapter 2. Could there be the return of Darkrai. So looking forward if you like the idea.

Sapphire_Trainer

If I were to rewrite The Unknown Hero, what do you guys think I should change from the previous one? 

Sapphire_Trainer

@Wolfy_bluu It's because I hate the way I've written it before, since the first chapters were written when I was younger. 
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Wolfy_bluu

@Sapphire_Trainer im soooo late for this but maybe change the fact that there is NO DAMN ENDING??? >:(
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Parrot23456789

Are you going to keep writing the unknown hero?

Parrot23456789

@Sapphire_Trainer oh okay. Ngl, that makes me kinda sad :( at least I can looks forward to the rewrite!
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Sapphire_Trainer

@Parrot23456789 I think not, as I might consider making a rewrite.
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Sapphire_Trainer

Wattpad has been so buggy lately...

JanjaHyena2

@Sapphire_Trainer Not as bad as Amino though. I can't even get into the app most of the time without it saying "Error (unknown)"
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Sapphire_Trainer

@-OPHILIA I can't even reply to comments without my keyboard lagging what the heck-
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Sapphire_Trainer

This account is just a bit dead lol

Billycorn2002

@Sapphire_Trainer so were mullets. Yet, here we are
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Sapphire_Trainer

@SpeedTopnotch Now that I think of it... the unknown hero was badly written oh gosh-
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HavoKL

@Sapphire_Trainer mystery dungeon was epic, you could make more
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Sapphire_Trainer

Bro... re-reading The Unknown Hero just makes me cringe to the next level. To me it has spiraled to a huge mess. The villain sucks, Kate just sounds annoying to me and I just can't stand how I even wrote them all and thought they were good enough. It's just really bad...

Billycorn2002

@Sapphire_Trainer looking at old works is like, thanks for memories, bye now!
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