@Sapphires3rdDiamond
So, what did you think of the chapters? Apart from the little mess-up I made.
I've fixed it now though
Also, if you get the chance, could you check out the email I sent you? I'm really sorry if I'm being a pain right now, but you're pretty much my only source of feedback.
@noireve23 your all good girl. I sent an email about it. Let me know once you get to it. Ttyl
I'll email you all the posted chapters and drafted as soon as possible
Also the drafts include the revelation chapters
The shack scene, etc
So you can add on as well to them
Ohkay
It's fine with me
@noireve23 also I think we should keep the story on just your account. Not that I wouldn't love to have this story on both accounts, but I am not as responsible about these things (keeping up with and checking in on things) as you are, not to mention they are your ideas. I know you said your limited on when you write so if I'll still help comes with writing prompts and ideas (when my brain works for stuff like books) but it would be best if it was updated on your acc. This is just my opinion, you can tell me otherwise if you don't like it.
@noireve23 yes, right, sry. I'll get on that. I've been isolating myself from reality for a little while but im back now, so I'll get on those.
Hiiii!!!
Oh so you are the middle child...
I also have a younger brother
He is 8 years younger
@noireve23 no I have two siblings, and older brother who 12 years older than me and a younger sister who is 2 years younger than me. I also have a half sibling but I've never met them before.
Are you a single child??
Harry Potter: The Girl Who Defied Death
Main Character(can change it)
Name: Lyra(can change it)Black-Potter
(Daughter of Sirius Black and a hidden descendant of an ancient healer bloodline.)
Born secretly during the First Wizarding War, Lyra was hidden from everyone — even most of the Order. Only Remus Lupin, James Potter, and Lily Potter knew she existed.
The prophecy about Harry was only half the prophecy.
The second half spoke of:
“The child whose hands shall close the wounds of death itself.”
Her Powers
Lyra possesses an ancient magic called Vitae , a lost branch of magic older than wandwork.
She can:
Heal cursed wounds instantly
Remove dark magic from objects
Feel people’s pain physically
See “echoes” of the dead
Bring someone back from death…
…but only under terrifying conditions.
Every resurrection steals part of her own life.
The more she uses the power, the paler and weaker she becomes almost ghostlike.
The Twist
She cannot truly resurrect people forever.
The dead return changed.
Not evil. Not zombies. But incomplete.
They remember things no human should know:
whispers beyond death,
forgotten spells,
truths about souls.
Some become unstable after returning.
The Ministry bans all discussion of Lyra’s magic.
The Real Conflict
When Cedric Diggory dies during the Triwizard Tournament, Lyra secretly brings him back.
But Cedric returns speaking about:
“Something worse than Voldemort waiting beyond the veil.”
Soon:
ghosts begin disappearing,
portraits stop moving,
dementors start fleeing Azkaban,
and the veil in the Department of Mysteries begins tearing open.
Every resurrection weakens the boundary between life and death.
And tbh I don't really know how we are supposed to write the chapters
It can be posted on anyone's account
I need help with the roles all other characters are going to play
Ofcourse there will be fillers and foreshadowing is the most important since the plot and twist is epic
I also thought of name yesterday
Its Amaris
How do we write this together. Should it be posted on your account because you thought of it? What other plot points do you need help coming up with? Will their be filler chapters? Foreshadowing? Eastereggs? Lyra>>Astra or Astrid?
Hiya Venus!!!
Wassup?
Life's good?
Have you ever dated??
I know its personal but I never have and all my friends have been single since god knows how long
So i don't even know what it's like
And if I think about it I barely have friends and all of them are just like me,
Untouched by whatever is wrong with this generation
@noireve23 your*
Well I also finished reading a book but that was a week ago
Still it counts
It's the Shepherd King duet
One dark window and two twisted crowns
Hi
May I know your name
That would be easier for us to share our ideas
Don't worry, I am also a budding writer like you who doesn't know how to pen down her incredible thoughts and ideas....
It's your wish
You can also check my work
It's short but it's mine.....
Boo.
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