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Hi there! Please could you read my book and help by giving constructive criticism.  Thank you so much 
          
          https://my.w.tt/A3vpCUSZY7

mucha gracias por seguirme! Me preocupa que mi inglés sea difícil de leer, pero leo a Marianela en español, así que tal vez estoy siendo muy cauteloso. Pero te advierto que sí uso grandes palabras. :-P mucho gusto.

Happy New year!! 
          If you have time, please check out my story. It's about a young rich boy who fights his attraction towards a bratty mean girl. I'd really appreciate it if you do. 
          Thanks!!! 
          https://my.w.tt/UiNb/r8UaSTpRsI

Sci-fi will be a trend this summer! Check the genre for the next months, lots of good authors are on the way ;)

One of the things i like about Betty Shuttle is that she was born unexpectedly –at the beginning she didn't even have a name– i didn't know she lived with a father in a wheelchair that passed his evenings drinking root beer and watching tv or that her mother was a loser that comes back home once her boyfriends dump her. She was going to be a typical girl that fell for the new boy and then... Bam! She takes out her gunshot, thinks that Blaine Alistair winking at her means that he has an eye tick and couldn't care less about the new boy, the pranks or even her looks. She is a tough girl, an amazon, and if you step in her property... She throws Mimi –her boxer dog.

Thanks for the votes on Testoster-zone :) Do you like it so far? 

The young step-mom has turned into a cliché x|

POISONINGS
          BREAST CANCER
          SUICIDE
          CORONARY HEART DISEASE
          ROAD TRAFFIC ACCIDENTS
          LIVER DISEASE
          ENDOCRINE DISORDERS
          DIABETES MELLITUS
          STROKE
          HYPERTENSION
          COLON-RECTUM CANCERS
          CERVICAL CANCER
          HOMICIDE
          LUNG CANCERS
          INFLUENZA & PNEUMONIA
          BLOOD POISONING
          INFLAMMATORY/HEART
          HIV/AIDS
          OTHER INJURIES
          MATERNAL CONDITIONS
          OVARY CANCER
          KIDNEY DISEASE
          LEUKEMIA
          LUNG DISEASE
          LYMPHOMAS
          ALCOHOL
          CONGENITAL ANOMALIES
          ASTHMA
          DRUG USE
          UTERIN CANCER
          SKIN CANCERS
          STOMACH CANCER
          PANCREAS CANCER
          OTHER NEOPLASMS
          FALLS
          MULTIPLE SCLEROSIS
          LIVER CANCER
          EPILEPSY
          DROWNINGS
          FIRES
          HEPATITIS C
          ORAL CANCER
          SKIN DISEASE
          DIARRHOEAL DISEASES
          OESOPHAGUS CANCER
          BLADDER CANCER
          RHEUMATIC/HEART
          PEPTIC ULCER DISEASE
          HEPATITIS B
          MALNUTRITION 
          With so many death causes... Why use again and again car accidents!? 

Saramendivil, pls read my werewolf-vamp-romance book called immortal obsession

People know me as a good person, I want to believe I am a good person, until I look deep inside and the void stares back at me. I'm no iceberg, just surface and no base. Who would want to drown in my darkness?