Sarah Duke

Hello there! How are you doing?
          So, I'm here because I'm writing a new story and I would be really glad if you could check it out when/if you have some time.
          I'm leaving the synopsis and the link down here.
          Sorry to disturb you, by the way.
          
          Loads of love, ❤
          - S
          
          Synopsis: "I promise" he said when they were about seven years old. She didn't know why, but she was happy with it and even not really knowing what they were talking about, she thought they would be togheter forever because that's how fairytales end, with happy endings, of course.
          But it turned out in another way, one that our protagonist wasn't expecting. But still, she will find out what love really means in an adventure that she never thought she'd be in.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/218124888-don%27t-make-me-promises
          
          

Thanks for the follow! ♥️

Sorry I didn’t mean to post that so many times Wattpad is acting strange

Sarah, I’m Claudia’s Beta and I suggested she look at her story. She originally had Rory find Finn in the bathroom then leave him to go back to Logan.  I told her that I don’t think that Finn would go back with her at the end. That he wouldn’t trust her. Plus he was at his most vulnerable and she left him. Maybe it’s a cultural difference but since most of the readers are Americans would they be able to accept this story.... she needed to really look at it.  Prior to writing these last four stories she never did an outline until I suggested it and it has helped her improve her stories. 

Sarah, I’m Claudia’s Beta and I suggested she look at her story. She originally had Rory find Finn in the bathroom then leave him to go back to Logan.  I told her that I don’t think that Finn would go back with her at the end. That he wouldn’t trust her. Plus he was at his most vulnerable and she left him. Maybe it’s a cultural difference but since most of the readers are Americans would they be able to accept this story.... she needed to really look at it.  Prior to writing these last four stories she never did an outline until I suggested it and it has helped her improve her stories. 

Sarah, I’m Claudia’s Beta and I suggested she look at her story. She originally had Rory find Finn in the bathroom then leave him to go back to Logan.  I told her that I don’t think that Finn would go back with her at the end. That he wouldn’t trust her. Plus he was at his most vulnerable and she left him. Maybe it’s a cultural difference but since most of the readers are Americans would they be able to accept this story.... she needed to really look at it.  Prior to writing these last four stories she never did an outline until I suggested it and it has helped her improve her stories. 

Sarah, I’m Claudia’s Beta and I suggested she look at her story. She originally had Rory find Finn in the bathroom then leave him to go back to Logan.  I told her that I don’t think that Finn would go back with her at the end. That he wouldn’t trust her. Plus he was at his most vulnerable and she left him. Maybe it’s a cultural difference but since most of the readers are Americans would they be able to accept this story.... she needed to really look at it.  Prior to writing these last four stories she never did an outline until I suggested it and it has helped her improve her stories.