@FightingTheFlames no i meant that there were repeats and some sentances were wrote in bits EG it was. it wss a great and then the paragraph would finally appear. so it made the book unreadable to me, that is why it was annoying because I wanna know what happens but i cant understand it. I dont know if it is just my phone or the book itself but it was frustrating. Dont get me wrong i live the book since it is one of the only books that i have read that when it is updated there is actually alot to read, giving me something to do and I love shawn and em as well <3 I just didnt want to reply to the comments becuase I wasnt sure if they would misunderstand and make it worse