Love the song in your bio. I was probably obsessed with it this time last year xD Cool idea for your book, btw. Your writing is pretty good, I've only read the first chapter, just remember when you do tie these scenes into a book to not focus too much on the emotions. For dramatic scenes, yes, but there is a constent when it comes to dramatic stories and first person narratives that the voice becomes whiny in a way. I'm not saying that is how it is, I'm just warning you because I feel like you have a great grasp on it, I just don't want you falling down a trend ;)
