Thank you so much for your honesty! I really appreciate it and it’s not rude, on the contrary it is probably the best explanation of what is wrong with Melle that I have gotten! All I usually hear is that he’s trash but not how I can improve him. As for Aimee not wearing red, I didn’t realize that I hadn’t written her wearing it. Thank you, I will be making some changes! If you are interested and have time, I’d love to hear what you think of another book of mine, ‘Burning Embers’. If not I completely understand, I just find your honesty incredibly helpful and refreshing. Thank you again!