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hi !! you asked me a few days ago to review your story, i just finished the 'stalker' one and i have a few pieces of advice from what i've read so far:
- your details are amazing and clearly depict the emotions of the characters. however, i've learned through experience that the things people want on wattpad is hot interactions. given that i'm only a little bit into the book, i don't know what the rest of the chapters might have, but my advice is, if you're comfortable with writing it, to have more heated interactions. your romance is cute, and for example in 'stalker' i could tell that mattheo wanted y/n badly, but readers don't just want to read about him watching her. they want interactions between them, like kissing, typical tropes (like friends to lovers, enemies to lovers, she's pregnant type shit, it started because of a bet, academic rivals, drunk love, etc), and dirtier stuff if you want to write it (i don't, but other authors definitely do and get a ton of attention).
other than that, so far the book is amazing :)) please know that these suggestions aren't insults either, just comments if you want to take them !!
