no i have read it a few times now, i really liked your ending as it was one i had not yet encountered in the stories placed here. it was very emotive and graceful. Songs often hit us differently than just words maybe its something in the poetry but they use them in tv dramas and movies all over the world so why not use them in your books. Loved it. i look foreword to the sequel when it arrives. (Please accept my apologies; for replying just now, i am not very observant of my messaging board as i mainly only read others stories when i go on here, I apologise )