SatoshiGekkouga01

Chapter 11 of Journeys Reborn is out! Do check it out!

SatoshiGekkouga01

So i guys i wanted to ask something, what do you think of this second OC i'm trying to create...you see i want him to be an villain/rival for Ash in Journeys Reborn. So, the personality i'm going for him is like complete opposite to Ash. Like he doesn't really care about breaking rules and stuff and is decently powerful...equal to a High elite four for now, so he should provide a decent challenge to ash and the thing is i'm trying to write an introductory battle and chapter for him. So, tell me will this type of Character work as a rival for Ash. i'll write his personality and traits more in depth as he keeps appearing more and more...i just don't want him to be a generic villain but someone who tries to redeem himself i guess?

user42177371

@SatoshiGekkouga01 I think this is not a bad idea, it reminds me of Paul in some way, but this is different. The classic confrontation between mirror-opposite characters is a pure classic!
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SatoshiGekkouga01

So I wanted to ask you Guys about something. The new story of mine. I'm not sure which arc should I focus on in chapter 6. You know should I continue with Ash and Sabrina for a few more chapters or should I make a chapter on some of Ash's friends and the next girl to join Ash. I don't know if it will break the rhythm I have set with the past 4 chapters. So give your thoughts. Also I think I have selected the rest of the 6 members.

SatoshiGekkouga01

@Pokedex-Complete yeah, that seems like the best move. Although there won't be any updates till Wednesday but I'll try to form the arc for chapter 6.
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EE3Roa

@SatoshiGekkouga01 interesting I agree it was just a guess.
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user42177371

@SatoshiGekkouga01 I think for now it's worth focusing on Ash and Sabrina, giving them more development, and then fully incorporating new members into the harem (And yes, thank you Misty isn't in the harem, but I hope my two favorites will be there... I'm sure of one, but the second is not the most popular..)
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