SavageKing_XD

I'm having conflicting feelings currently. 
          	
          	As I reread my story again, I'm feeling an urge to rewrite the front half of it since I'm kind of cringing from it. Especially at how OOC I wrote Kiyo and the way I practically forced Kiyo's character development and the relationships around him, especially regarding the harem stuff. (Writing developing relationship as well as new dialogs are difficult for me since I'm not really good at communication.)
          	
          	However, despite my urge to rewrite, I'm a little worried that if I rewrote the story, it wouldn't work out well since I would have to change the events of the chapters I have written to have it make sense.
          	
          	As of now, since I'm about to end my work by the end of next week, I'm probably going to edit the chapters a little during my free time, so if there's any chapters in the first half of the story until the end of the Warpulgis that you feel could be improved or changes that could be made, feel free to say so.

HongPhan558395

@ SavageKing_XD  You could say I'm looking forward to Velzard's arrival but according to the light novel, it takes a long time for Velzard to appear in Tempest.  You said that you will have difficulty updating new chapters in the future right?  This will prolong Velzard's appearance so if possible I hope you can edit the previous chapter.  Of course I fully respect your choice whatever it is.  I really like your work and thanks for considering my opinion
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SavageKing_XD

@HongPhan558395 Sorry for the late reply, and thanks for the suggestion! I don't mind writing Kiyotaka's first meeting with Guy and Velzard, just that I'm thinking that if I'm going to add it, it might be better to add that later on during a possible confrontation between Guy and Kiyo for the second time. Another possible way is to edit the earlier chapter during their first confrontation, but I feel like the former would add more 'dramatics', I suppose.
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HongPhan558395

@ SavageKing_XD can you add some scenes when Kiyo is traveling like when he goes to the eastern empire or when he goes to ice continent and meets Guy , Velzard for the first time
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Numba1HinaLover

Good to see author is alive

Numba1HinaLover

@SavageKing_XD  it's good to hear that you're doing alright now I am alright as well
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SavageKing_XD

@Full_Time_UT_Simp1 I'm alright, thanks for asking. Just worn out both mentally and physically due to irl stuff, and having restricted time for rest gave me little time to write and enjoy the normal stuff that I could two months back. Anyways, I hope you're doing fine as well.
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Numba1HinaLover

how have you been
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