Hi. First of all I want to say that I love your book. although I was sad about the breakup of the relationship at first, and then, very pissed (I confess) with them separated, maya engaged to another, I almost gave up on the story, but I couldn't, and I'm grateful for that because look now, they are together and happy.
As you have always been open to ideas, I would like to give you some for the next chapter.