SaydaHope

Thank you for the new follows:)

SaydaHope

https://www.wattpad.com/1465747718-summoned-season-1
          sᴜᴍᴍᴏɴᴇᴅ ɴᴇᴡ ʀᴇʟᴇᴀsᴇ!
          
          Sitting in bed, Creep's forearm sets on a raised knee, his hand hanging, claws loose. Leaning back against the headboard, he's been in the pose for long enough he's getting stiff. Feeling it mostly in his neck from its bend as he watches Jane sleep.
          
          Peacefully lying in her dreams, her hand rests limply by her face on the pillow, long white hair a mess around her. Each breath is taken through gurgles of snot in her nose, residue from shifting through dimensions of cold.
          
          Strong as Jane is for a human, that is the key word in his thoughts, looking down on her, human. With the summons in the subway, and now the otherworldly creatures from yesterday, Creep knows there will be some things she can't fight on her own. Big deal, he figures, her short comings are for him to go farther anyway.

MwMwLizard

Hey author!! Sorry for popping up like this, but could you take some time to read my story. 
          
          you'd be a great help and I'd really appreciate it <3
          
          And of course I'll read, vote  and support all of your works too. 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/347294121-return-of-the-outcast?utm_source=web&utm_medium=email&utm_content=share_myworks    
          
          Genre: Time travel, apocalypse, adventure, space, YA

SaydaHope

@MwMwLizard Thank you so much! Just to tell you this, I'm very glad to have that feedback about the scene description, because I actually feel like I do badly with it lol. It's one of those things where you have to remind yourself, others don't see in your head so you need to be descriptive, then I look back and think, "Well, I sucked at that." lol. It's very nice of you to say all that! Thank you!
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MwMwLizard

Thank you for your kindness and likewise. if you ever want someone to read your works,  I'm only one message board text away. I wish you all the best to you too.
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MwMwLizard

stop you're so nice.  Thank  you for the suggestions, advice and support. It really does mean a lot to me. I recently began reading your story 'the summoned:  season 1' , and I think it's criminal how underrated it is. I can't even really think of any constructive criticism or feedback to give you because  it's that good. 
            
            The plot is interesting, so are  the characters and the writing is  *mwha* chefs kiss.  I feel so immersed into it because of how detailed and well written the scenes are. Overall, a great story and I want to keep reading your work, so please don't stop. You will definitely go far with your story telling.
            
            Whatever our intentions are, whether we're writing as a hobby or something more, let's  continue to support each other and do what we love to do which is expressing our thoughts and idea through our stories and Like you said, we mustn't forget too have fun while on this journey.
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