
Jacks-Fall
I'm messaging here to have a more private conversation. Lol Well, I just mean it may be better to carry out our talk here or something than me babbling about my stories on the reply section of your work. Lol Thank you for considering taking a look! I have published a few poetry works, and I don't really plan to touch those up because they were written in the moment. So they are gonna stand as is. Lol But I would still appreciate you feed back on those. Just to know how it sounds from a readers perspective. I'm not always to thorough at getting my point across. Lol Secondly, I have a random short story/romance thing in working on. That is up for tweaks. Lol As said, I am new to this, and making points efficiently with grace isn't my forte. Also, I have a fanfic I'm working on. And that is up for tweaks as well. I want to be descriptive enough so it isn't boring, but I also want to emphasize the right details, you know? Not get too wordy and distract readers from the point of the story. Lol So, please take a look whenever. I'd really appreciate what ever you can give me!

ScarletRain42
Haha I appreciate it :D I read the attack on titan one and it seems interesting so far, i have seen the first season so I know a little bit. There were some spelling errors (of course I mean everyone has them lol) and I’m interested in unlocking more about this character as the story progresses. Also, google is a writer’s friend, don’t be afraid to look for synonyms and such. I do it all the time ♀️ but I like this direction so far!
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