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Hello again. I know Ive been posting a lot of messages here but I was surfing Pinterest and found something useful you might like! Somebody said when you need to tell the height of a person, you don't specify. You connect it to something else in the story. What is your character wanting to do in this scene? If your character thinks they might have to fight this person, height would come up. If your character is meeting them for the first time they might be surprised at how tall they are. Or, if they have a friend they THOUGHT was tall, and this new person is EVEN TALLER, that would come up. You can slip in things in the dialogue tags, comparing one person's height to another. Ex: "We have to go to the grocery store tomorrow," Matt said, looking down at Lori. "What if I get ice cream?" Keeping in mind the perspective of a Character and what they want to accomplish in any given situation can help you think of ways to put in information that doesn't feel unnatural! An characters ALWAYS want to do something, even if it's as simple as getting a glass of water. I hope this helped give you some ideas!