UnreliableMillennial

Hey, so you totally don’t have to but I’m writing a book for the first time and I would really appreciate some feedback. 

UnreliableMillennial

It’s called ‘This Winter’
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UnreliableMillennial

 It’s on my profile. Just tell me honestly how you feel about it and you don’t have to read it all.
            
            I might re-edit the whole thing. Basically I’ve wanted to write a book for a long time, and I really like the characters I’m just trying to figure out a good plot/path because I have a lot of scenes I want to write I just need to string them together 
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Scarlet_Mires

@Obsessivepersonality yeah that's fine just send it through when you're ready 
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UnreliableMillennial

I can't see the latest chapter

Scarlet_Mires

@Obsessivepersonality shh yes  it's going up now though
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UnreliableMillennial

lol did you accidentally publish the chapter again 
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Scarlet_Mires

@Obsessivepersonality aahh sorry that's actually a new chapter I was working on that I accidently published, but the new chapter will be out today  thanks for letting me know
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