Bonnie and Tinsley

@fortydaydream keep going how you're going and you'll be fine :)

@fortydaydream thanks :) 

@Scarlet_Wolves Oh, no, you were completely within your rights to do so; people tend to crumple too easily under the weight of critiques (even minor ones), and that's been something I've been looking to get better at. I'm honored to be among the few writers to impress you! :D

@Inhuman sure I will definitley

@fortydaydream its cool I was worried I'd sound a little bit horrid saying that. I like to give people through revwies of their work because how are they  going to become a better writer? but you really are talented, its very rare I get really impressed and drawn into a book on wattpad

Hey, first and foremost, welcome to wattpad :] To the both of you -- I've always wanted to tug my friend into an account and tag team. But I think both parties need cool names, so it would never work, haha... Secondly, thanks so much for giving my story a read, and adding it to your library! I see what you mean about the first sentence... I've actually been thinking of a way to spruce up the whole first paragraph, so thanks for confirming my suspicions. I'm glad you liked it as whole, though. Hopefully I won't disappoint!

Hi,
          
          I see you are new to Wattpad. Welcome! ^‿^
          
          If you have any questions, feel free to ask me.
          
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