ScarySarie

Hello all! I would love it if you guys would take a few minutes to read some of my work! Writing has always been a part of who I am; but I've always felt weird sharing things I'd written with anyone else. It used to stress me nearly to panic attack level to even think of anyone else getting their hands on one of my notebooks...
          	Part of my problem is that I struggle to have any faith in my writing. I'm afraid that I'm just typing along, convinced I'm creating something good; only to find out that in actuality, I'm a terrible author. And the mass of words that I stuck together just don't really work...
          	And the second part of my aversion to sharing is that it feels so intimate. It's my innermost musings and desires, my fears and all the important bits that make me, ME. 
          	
          	So this endeavor is a leap of faith. A step towards bravery and a chance to hopefully settle the internal debate that continues in my head. 
          	
          	Give me the truth, folks!? What should i work on? Is the story engaging? Is there anything that just doesn't seem to flow? Tips, advice, criticisms and opinions, please?! 

ScarySarie

Hello all! I would love it if you guys would take a few minutes to read some of my work! Writing has always been a part of who I am; but I've always felt weird sharing things I'd written with anyone else. It used to stress me nearly to panic attack level to even think of anyone else getting their hands on one of my notebooks...
          Part of my problem is that I struggle to have any faith in my writing. I'm afraid that I'm just typing along, convinced I'm creating something good; only to find out that in actuality, I'm a terrible author. And the mass of words that I stuck together just don't really work...
          And the second part of my aversion to sharing is that it feels so intimate. It's my innermost musings and desires, my fears and all the important bits that make me, ME. 
          
          So this endeavor is a leap of faith. A step towards bravery and a chance to hopefully settle the internal debate that continues in my head. 
          
          Give me the truth, folks!? What should i work on? Is the story engaging? Is there anything that just doesn't seem to flow? Tips, advice, criticisms and opinions, please?!