Ok so I've written the first 2 chapters of an original story, starring my friends' OCs and my own as humans *cough*mostly*cough*. So I want to post it on here, but I'm going to make another account so that my family can get on and read it as well, without seeing my other fanfics XD So, would you go to my other account and give me some constructive criticism maybe? And not mention this account at all? XD