@ScholaePalitinae
I have just post chapter 4 of Into Persia and I definitely feel that this is my strongest writing so far.
@ScholaePalitinae girl are you still active ? Did you become a history major or nah. Hopefully you doing good
Also, any feedback whatsoever is completely appreciated and encouraged.
To anybody that has already read my story: I have just completed a lot of revisions to make it less cringy. I've changed some names, and dialogue to try and make it not so choppy and awkward. I have also posted the full Chapter 3, and beginning of Chapter 4.
Chapter 2, "Pausanias' Betrayal" will be out soon.
