Somebody you will never meet

Heya. Sorry for the disturbance. I don't know if you like sci-fi or not. But here is a story I wrote. Give it a try. I don't really have much readers. 
          And if it sounds like begging I am, Yes I am t-t
          
          Please cheak it out and leave some comments so that I know if my imaginations are worth writing down. (If you have time of course) 
          
          -An aspiring writer [Nash_Books]
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/341856802?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Nash_Books

Hello, I am a new writer on Wattpad. i would like it if someone read my story and gave me honest feedback. 
          
          Username: ReemaRTW 
          
          Story Title: The Partham Chronicles 
          
          Story description: Leysa Bhaskara has secrets, that she has safeguarded for many years. But now they are threatened to be exposed. Her family and her children don't have any idea of what the future holds for them. Her children are going to be put through the Selective Legacy Tests, where they are going to compete against each other. Only one is going to be selected. What will happen if her family is threatened? And the future of an entire planet is in jeopardy. 
          
          This story is about Leysa and Navil and their three children Aaden, Vysna and Tashvin. How their lives will change and what secrets they uncover in their world and the Partham ( Aliens that are living among them ) world along with fighting with sinister forces.
          
          
          Tropes:
          Family 
          Friendship 
          Siblings 
          Secrets 
          Mystery 
          Lgbt
          Fun
          Love
          
          Genre: Sci-fi 
          Age: Any

Hei, I saw that you are experienced in sci-fi. I wrote a new book that is sci-fi, romance, adventure, magical and fiction. I am confused how it is going. Will you please read it and just give me some suggestions. That would be very helpful. The name is:
          ☄Another Day: Heartless wish 
          I am sorry if I bothered you but I don't know whom to ask.♡

Great Story! ✌

Hi, please Check out, DFruite by @myth-twist 

@TheWingedReader Yeah sure I'm happy to check it out but I do read a lot of thing so if it doesn't get straight back to you that is probably why.

@Aerosylle you can use the app to edit your books (it's just not obvious on how to do it). If all fails you can go back to using a PC/laptop/computer. 

Ok that reading list that I have has really glitched so if I was you don't try reading it as it could be out of date

Yay, both my lists seam not to be working. If anyone can tell me what has happen that will be appreciated.

My Reading list (Sci-Fi-Fangirl's Reading list) isn't working so don't really look at it.