Ps love the book but I can’t really help with the plot because I don’t know what kinda book you want this to be. If given a general direction will definitely help brain storm. The only thing I can say is stay away from the big hidden conspiracy plot line because there are too many of those. I personally want it to keep going like it is. Fun for the most part with some serious parts in between also mainly focusing on the game. So many other game books ignore the actual playing of the game.I also love how creative and flexible he is with his power, awesome.
Sincerely,
A Big Fan