@closetosane WOWWWW IT'S SO GOOD!!! The storyline is really well written, and your grammar is really great. Sure, there were a few spelling errors, but they are to be expected. No one's perfect!! You are a wonderful and creative writer, with just the right amount of description in the wording to get the scene across without dragging it out. I personally love the concept. I am sad to know that you only write this story to cope. I used Quotev for that too, so I understand. I hope that when, NOT if, WHEN you get through this, you still continue the story for fun. I get that you may end it early if it turns on you and ends up depressing you. I'm certain that others will accept that justification as well. That aside, I see nothing to change but very slight and insignificant grammatical errors. Keep up the amazing work, and never forget that there are people who care about you!! Quick question, how did you find me and decide that I was worthy of being blessed with your story?
