Scoringbox

I’ve been seriously considering revising my whole Shards series. 
          	
          	Is that bad? I know it means a huge delay of future events, but I don’t know if my methods of writing are good enough for me to continue right now.
          	
          	What if my story could be much more than it is now? More simple?

Scoringbox

Sorry it took me so long to respond to this. 
          	  
          	  But I’m glad other people noticed the mistakes I noticed with my story earlier on. Hopefully, it means I’m improving and can refrain from info dumping in the future.
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pansrpunny

@Scoringbox I gotta agree with the top comment. You world is beautiful. But we need to get to the action! >:³
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lavender-clouds

@Scoringbox Nahh your story's cool (as far as i've read). You don't need to rewrite it but you do (i thought about it a bit and came to this conclusion) need to remove all the extra descriptions that serve no purpose. What i mean is, it sounds like you went really deep into the worldbuilding, thought of coll stuff that you couldn't resist leaving out of the book, and then kind of info dumped on everyone.
          	  
          	  Sorry if this comment is a mess i just don't have the energy to structure my thoughts properly
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Scoringbox

I’ve been seriously considering revising my whole Shards series. 
          
          Is that bad? I know it means a huge delay of future events, but I don’t know if my methods of writing are good enough for me to continue right now.
          
          What if my story could be much more than it is now? More simple?

Scoringbox

Sorry it took me so long to respond to this. 
            
            But I’m glad other people noticed the mistakes I noticed with my story earlier on. Hopefully, it means I’m improving and can refrain from info dumping in the future.
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pansrpunny

@Scoringbox I gotta agree with the top comment. You world is beautiful. But we need to get to the action! >:³
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lavender-clouds

@Scoringbox Nahh your story's cool (as far as i've read). You don't need to rewrite it but you do (i thought about it a bit and came to this conclusion) need to remove all the extra descriptions that serve no purpose. What i mean is, it sounds like you went really deep into the worldbuilding, thought of coll stuff that you couldn't resist leaving out of the book, and then kind of info dumped on everyone.
            
            Sorry if this comment is a mess i just don't have the energy to structure my thoughts properly
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Emilycruze

Thanks for voting for my book

Scoringbox

You can also check out MorrowStar if you’d like! It’s the newer book and if you liked my last one you’ll like this one too! 
            
            Your books are good so far! I’ll be sure to keep reading them
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Scoringbox

No problem!
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Scoringbox

I can’t draw....
          
          Been trying for 2 years and I just can’t.
          
          What’s wrong with me?

Scoringbox

Thanks.
            
            I just have these fits when everything in my life seems stupid at one point in time. 
            
            Thanks for the encouragement though.
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xxoluomzxx

@Scoringbox nothing is wrong with you just stop trying to make evrything you draw someone elses definition of perfect
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