Hey friend, I don't know how to contact you outside of here or our writing sprints...I just wanted to say I, for one, love your story. PLEASE don't let somebody destroy your willingness to write. I got a harsh review on a story of mine, and I gave up writing for 14 years... Just because someone doesn't "get" your story, and just because it needs some work, doesn't mean you should give up.
When I told you your writing made me cry, I was so excited to read the new 30's chapters, I wasn't blowing smoke. When I said I cannot WAIT until you publish this and hold signings, I want to fly out and be like Elf, yelling, "I KNOW HIM! I KNOW HIM!" I wasn't lying. I feel like you are doing something SO unique and beautiful, that person might not be ready for it.
Watching your writing evolve has been such a gift. You make me feel braver by just witnessing your struggles and BRAVERY in putting your RAW work out there. I really hope to see you on another sprint, my friend. I really haven't felt a kinship with another writer since high school.
We put so much of ourselves in our writing, so when it gets ripped apart, the wounds are real. It sounds like you didn't find the right match for your story.
I have that sisterly, "I wanna go beat them up" feeling right now. Don't you dare let one naysayer squash your story, buddy. It's meant for bigger and better things.
Sometimes, we can use that "it's a good idea, but you'll never pull it off" as fuel to prove them wrong.
When you come back to writing, you've got an ally waiting to read. <3