Legendanthony
Your pacing and atmosphere make it feel like I'm watching everything happen in front of me. You build tension in such a simple but powerful way. Loved this chapter.
Scrollmother
Thank you so much! This was only the first paragraph—there are 70,000 more words waiting to unfold here. I’ll also be sharing the behind‑the‑lore scrolls soon on Substack, once the magazine layout is ready.