starruella
I am beyond enjoying "cinders and stardust" honestly I'm not the type to really like Wattpad stories that much, I usually read them to just waste time around, but I'm genuinely hooked up with this one, Stella and Ashriel are living in my dreams rent free, and I'm re reading it all the time, my gallery is literally full of screenshots of my favourite parts, I'm a writer myself but your writing is just so well done, very well described, put together and pretty much can turn into a movie, My only note that I'd say is that, I felt that it lacked a little bit of Ashriel's thoughts, when Stella was talking about how she's developing feelings and so on... I wish it also included what Ash was thinking too. Like Stella's dominance on the monologue was very nice but it would've been slightly better if we got Ash's inner thoughts as well I was always left wondering what Ash thought when Stella wore the bikini, held his hand, kissed him back... I hope you get the point, but nevertheless it's a masterpiece !!
ScylerJade
@starmilina thanks for the input. Unfortunately thats one of the downsides of writing in first person, and it kinda bugs me too honestly. Perhaps I will go Stephanie Meyer with it and make another book of the same book from his perspective. Or when I finally get finished with beta reading and publish I will add parts from his perspective or change the POV completely as this is just a first draft. But I am really happy you are enjoying it. I am working on the other 2 books but have no idea when they will be done as I am working on my other series for publishing at this time. Waiting for the beta reading to come back for that. Thank you so much for your feedback and support. It means a lot :)
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