ScylerJade

I don't know if anybody reads my stuff on here, but Chapter 21 of The Conspiracy Project has been posted. Sorry about the lateness. We are in the process of moving and I am having a hard time managing my time.

starruella

I am beyond enjoying "cinders and stardust" honestly I'm not the type to really like Wattpad stories that much, I usually read them to just waste time around, but I'm genuinely hooked up with this one, Stella and Ashriel are living in my dreams rent free, and I'm re reading it all the time, my gallery is literally full of screenshots of my favourite parts, 
          I'm a writer myself but your writing is just so well done, very well described, put together and pretty much can turn into a movie, 
          My only note that I'd say is that,
          I felt that it lacked a little bit of Ashriel's thoughts, when Stella was talking about how she's developing feelings and so on...
          I wish it also included what Ash was thinking too. Like Stella's dominance on the monologue was very nice but it would've been slightly better if we got Ash's inner thoughts as well
          I was always left wondering what Ash thought when Stella wore the bikini, held his hand, kissed him back...
          I hope you get the point, but nevertheless it's a masterpiece !!

ScylerJade

@starmilina thanks for the input. Unfortunately thats one of the downsides of writing in first person, and it kinda bugs me too honestly. Perhaps I will go Stephanie Meyer with it and make another book of the same book from his perspective. Or when I finally get finished with beta reading and publish I will add parts from his perspective or change the POV completely as this is just a first draft. But I am really happy you are enjoying it. I am working on the other 2 books but have no idea when they will be done as I am working on my other series for publishing at this time. Waiting for the beta reading to come back for that. Thank you so much for your feedback and support. It means a lot :)
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ScylerJade

Hey guys. My son and I have both been sick as of late, so I haven't been able to get much done in the writing department. I'm gonna try to have something out before I go back to work, but no promises.

ScylerJade

@10073890cg thanks. I think im better-ish. Just lost my voice but I'm more concerned about my kid. Doctor said he should be better in 7 to 10 days though.
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10073890cg

Hope you and your son get better. (Sorry I accidentally wrote brother.)
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ScylerJade

Apparently I have come to the end of everything I had written for Cinders and Stardust, so posts from this point forward may slow down. I will still try to post once a week, but I can put up one of my other books to read in the meantime if anyone is interested.

ScylerJade

Posting will slow down on Gatekeeper Resurgence for the time being, as I am working on new chapters day in and day out, but I will probably still be updating Cinders and Stardust more often as all I have to do is read over, edit, and tweak the chapters I already have written for now.