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I can picture Elara Thane so vividly gray eyes full of resilience, golden-blonde hair tousled and damp from Level 824’s heavy air, and a mix of determination and vulnerability in her expression. She wear a worn tactical jacket with scuffed plating, blaster at her thigh, helmet dangling loosely, a fresh cut at her neck and grime on her cheek. Hunter would be just a step behind, his presence steady, while the shadow of the Overseer lingers in the distance, the air thick with smoke and tension. If you could see her fully realized like this, what extra detail would you add to make her feel even more alive?

SeaBreeze1313

I think, Elara needs to show readers exactly who trained her 
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flutist15s

Ok but, I can’t believe your writing has been overlooked!!! It’s incredible! I love your style and the cadence of your writing!! 

SeaBreeze1313

Omg I’ll work on it just for you Queen! Give me a little time, I’ll post the next few.  I got rough drafts right now lol 
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flutist15s

Of course!! Always dying for the next update!! 
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SeaBreeze1313

Aw thank you!! Honestly, third person is so difficult for me. But I’ve been crafting this story for years and decided to publish it bit by bit to have it saved somewhere. I’m so happy you like it! 
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