SeaWeedRiptide

Well, finally some free time on my hands. I'm going to get back to writing. 
          	Throughout the last week, I did some (*a lot*) research on Pertemis fanfictions. Frankly, I found a bit of a problem with the ship. 
          	Artemis is an immortal, and Percy is a mortal. 
          	Now that might seem okay, but seriously there is a huge problem. Any Pertemis story has to end in any of these 3 ways:
          	A. Percy becomes an immortal. B. A tragedy (Percy dies). C. Artemis becomes a mortal. 
          	A is the most commonly used trope in this fandom. Nobody likes a tragedy, and both the other options end up in tragedy. Unfortunately, A is deeply flawed because the only way Artemis would respect or even remotely like Percy is because of his unpredictability, his principles, and his fatal flaw. Becoming immortal would fundamentally mean he loses his fatal flaw, and his principles (not a chance without it). So, Pertemis is tbh improbable in that situation, and certainly not ideal. Way B is a tragedy and it can make up some truly good story, but unless someone just wants to torture people for the fun of it, B is out. Last but best is C. The difference between B and C is that in B, Percy dies, but in C, both of them die eventually. 
          	
          	So, this is all my research work, and I am trying to figure out a way to make the best Pertemis story. For the meantime here's a story I would recommend to every Pertemis fan. Trust me, even if you dont like the ship, give it a try. It beats every other story you have ever read:
          	https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12116819/1/Gambit-s-Refrain

Iiesuu

@SeaWeedRiptide okay but also I like reading ships that make me feel happy n pertemis makes me feel happy
          	  
          	  Also who's to say if semi-immortals keep their fatal flaw (I dont believe it was ever confirmed) so... that's an option
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SeaWeedRiptide

@Daveedpjo yea I rly understand what you mean. I had a phase where I thought of that too and now I've been researching on this ship (along with some other ships) and I found out that many fanfic writers ruined it. Some stories have a whole lot of potential which was just totally destroyed. 
          	  Also it's tricky to make this ship work. So, yea, sometimes (most of the times) it makes no sense
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@SeaWeedRiptide ngl I hate pertemis sm it’s such a shit ship in my opinion and makes no sense
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SeaWeedRiptide

Well, finally some free time on my hands. I'm going to get back to writing. 
          Throughout the last week, I did some (*a lot*) research on Pertemis fanfictions. Frankly, I found a bit of a problem with the ship. 
          Artemis is an immortal, and Percy is a mortal. 
          Now that might seem okay, but seriously there is a huge problem. Any Pertemis story has to end in any of these 3 ways:
          A. Percy becomes an immortal. B. A tragedy (Percy dies). C. Artemis becomes a mortal. 
          A is the most commonly used trope in this fandom. Nobody likes a tragedy, and both the other options end up in tragedy. Unfortunately, A is deeply flawed because the only way Artemis would respect or even remotely like Percy is because of his unpredictability, his principles, and his fatal flaw. Becoming immortal would fundamentally mean he loses his fatal flaw, and his principles (not a chance without it). So, Pertemis is tbh improbable in that situation, and certainly not ideal. Way B is a tragedy and it can make up some truly good story, but unless someone just wants to torture people for the fun of it, B is out. Last but best is C. The difference between B and C is that in B, Percy dies, but in C, both of them die eventually. 
          
          So, this is all my research work, and I am trying to figure out a way to make the best Pertemis story. For the meantime here's a story I would recommend to every Pertemis fan. Trust me, even if you dont like the ship, give it a try. It beats every other story you have ever read:
          https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12116819/1/Gambit-s-Refrain

Iiesuu

@SeaWeedRiptide okay but also I like reading ships that make me feel happy n pertemis makes me feel happy
            
            Also who's to say if semi-immortals keep their fatal flaw (I dont believe it was ever confirmed) so... that's an option
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SeaWeedRiptide

@Daveedpjo yea I rly understand what you mean. I had a phase where I thought of that too and now I've been researching on this ship (along with some other ships) and I found out that many fanfic writers ruined it. Some stories have a whole lot of potential which was just totally destroyed. 
            Also it's tricky to make this ship work. So, yea, sometimes (most of the times) it makes no sense
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Daveedpjo

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@SeaWeedRiptide ngl I hate pertemis sm it’s such a shit ship in my opinion and makes no sense
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SeaWeedRiptide

The first chapter has already been released. I have completed writing the 2nd chapter. (it's completely new) and it is scheduled to be published on 19th June at 10:00 AM UTC. It's got real op fight scenes and at the end, the author being evil. 
          So how was the 1st chappy?

SeaWeedRiptide

How's the new cover for the book?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/371027600-%F0%9D%94%97%F0%9D%94%A5%F0%9D%94%A2-%F0%9D%94%93%F0%9D%94%AF%F0%9D%94%A6%F0%9D%94%AB%F0%9D%94%A0%F0%9D%94%A2%27%F0%9D%94%B0-%E2%84%9C%F0%9D%94%9E%F0%9D%94%A4%F0%9D%94%A2-a-pjo-and-hp-crossover

SeaWeedRiptide

used magic to make it. . . AI magic
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The twisted anatomy of an author:
          Fingers: Hey brain, any plan?
          Brain: Not really. I think we need to summon creativity here.
          Creativity: Bro, I was chilling with toes down there. Why did you call me now?
          Brain: We want to do something new about rewriting the fanfic.
          Creativity: Just call cliche. . . 
          Cliche: Whassup my bro? Thy summon'th me?
          Creativity: Yea we had to summon your royal arse, so quit spitting Shakespeare. Give us a plot.
          Cliche: Hmm. *extensive thinking, sweat dripping from forehead*
          Forehead: Don't abuse me bruh.
          Cliche: EUREKA! Let's make Annabeth cheat on Percy. 
          Brain: Isn't that what we did last time?
          Cliche: Yea but last time was with Heracles. This time lets do it with. . . Jason?
          Brain: Why is Cliche in this council?
          Creativity: I vote we kick him out of here.
          Cliche: Alright. alright. let's make annie cheat with . . . Grover?
          Anus: That's disgusting.
          Cliche: You are disgusting. shut up.
          Brain: Why is Anus here? 
          Anus: *backs away*
          Creativity: But that's disgusting for real. Do you mind coming up with smth else, Cliche?
          Cliche: Okay. we are going to make Annabeth cheat with . . . Zeus!
          Brain: My brain hurts!
          Cliche: You can't have a brain, brain.
          Cliche: Can we get Cliche locked up?
          Skeletal System: We are here to do your bidding, my lord Brain.
          Brain: Throw Cliche to the prison. 
          Skeletal: *grabs Cliche, throws them in the pits of Tartarus*
          Brain: Great. Creativity, come up with smth.
          Creativity: Let's kill Annabeth.
          Brain: Why did the Cliche virus get to you too?
          Creativity: Oh no, but i have a plan. Cruelty, get your slim ass down here!
          Cruelty: Oh hey, Brain. Hey Creativity. Sup?
          Creativity: We want to kill annie, but you are going to play a role to make it new. 
          Cruelty: Ohhhhh, you got the right guy here. 
          Brain: What are you all thinking about?
          Creativity: *does the deed with cruelty to produce creative cruelty*
          Creative Cruelty:  *evil smile* Here's the plan *whispers it to Brain*
          Brain: We are so doing this. Fingers, get to work!