Sea_Zoe

Hi everyone! 
          	
          	I haven't been on Wattpad in ages! Lately I've been getting many comments on How to write a book, and that's why I decided to check it out again. I've been making small changes to it.
          	One tip that I've added: check out Jenna Moreci on YouTube. She's a writer who gives great advice on writing in general, and also explains things about her own writing process. Very interesting!
          	I have been getting excited about writing books again recently! I might put something up here, but I'm not sure yet...
          	
          	Love,
          	Zoe!

evelynjennifer1304

UniqueRidah

Hi, am a new writer and I was wondering if you could go through my work and tell me what I need to do, to improve on my writing,

UniqueRidah

@fly2live you think so? Thank you, that means alot to me
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fly2live

@UniqueRidah Two things stand out in this amazing poem (many actually triggered a storm...but I wont clutter ur MB).
            You have a natural way of touching all senses making the poem so vivid that it feels like a personal experience.
            Second...The beginning and ending are so mesmerising. Its a lovely lovely poem. 
            
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UniqueRidah

@fly2live @UniqueRidah I feel a cold warmth in my heart,
            My act of bravery is just but a facade.
            Like a thousand daggers pierced into my heart, life is worthless
            Your smiles were amazingly dangerous.
            
            I feel my heart fluttering
            Like a dessert, no water left in my eyes.
            Promises are uncertain shadows of realistic dreams.
            Hate is a word but my feeling is real.
            You never said u did stay for eternity but you never said you did leave.
            Eyes ever so glowy hunts my dreams like a nightmare.
            Can't breathe but must liveth 
            Searched for you in my heart but the only thing left is the warm hole in my heart.
            Could one's heart hurt this much?
            Loathe the very beginning of your end.
            
            Like an angel, you looketh so beautiful in thou final tidings 
            Your ever glowy and glittering eyes were now put to rest,
            My heart shredded into a million pieces
            I loathe thee for resting so early,
            But I would miss you for eternity.
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fgirley

Hi sea_zoe this is fgirley
          Ur pointers have really gotten me up and going Im now writing my first book in the lurch
          Am still in my first chapter but I just wanted to thank you for ur pointers and everything it will really mean a lot to me if u could swing by and help around with some votes and still help with the pointers 
          It will really mean a lot to me
          # stay safe

fgirley

@fgirley um..just wanted to tell you I have changed the name to broken Puzzles
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fly2live

@bentedos-eightsix Relax and write when you feel like. If you write for sake of writing and not to some end, you ll eventually reach
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