UNEXPECTED SURPRISE by Solimar
Finally completed. Well we’re do I start? Not the best written story, definitely needs a lot of editing, but I do love the characters and the story line as a whole. The vampire/leech thing was very confusing and felt it ruined and deterred the story a bit and felt like it was an afterthought to move the story along. I believe that this is a good base and if taken the time to rewrite, edit and make a few changes this could be a good story. The story has endless possibilities. Knowing this ahead of time, I think I still would have read and given it a chance.