SebastianUzategui

Just published the first part of DEMONS WITHIN. Hope you readers like what I wrote so far. if you have any suggestions on how I could improve on my work please let me know. it is still kind of a draft, but I wanted some feedback.
          	
          	Depending on the responses I get I plan to periodically update thi story.

SebastianUzategui

Just published the first part of DEMONS WITHIN. Hope you readers like what I wrote so far. if you have any suggestions on how I could improve on my work please let me know. it is still kind of a draft, but I wanted some feedback.
          
          Depending on the responses I get I plan to periodically update thi story.