SecretRose1

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rcarou

Hi! I just read Emotions on Fire. I see you're focused on poetry, but your poems are very narrative. Reading all the poems back to back provide a fair grasp of the character's in the story: the girl, the father, the boy... and you have some powerful material in there that would work great as fiction maybe short stories... 
          
          You describe the poems as non fiction, so I assume they deal with some autobiographical experiences. I don't know, maybe you wouldn't feel comfortable writing about them in length. It's tricky, I know. But I think there's a good story there, and you're a good narrator. 
          
          It's just an idea. I enjoyed reading your stuff as it is. :)