Secret_Lies

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          Demon’s Treasure: The Awakening 
          
          Changes are happening 
          Deaths close to home
          Secrets are beginning to unfold
          Dreams of shadows closing in.
          What will our protagonist do when it’s no longer just dreams? 
          
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Passage from Demon's Treasure
          
          
          "Ahhh! Make it stop! make it stop!" I scream and beg.
          
          Why won't it stop?
          
          I can't take it anymore.
          
          It feels like my mind is being ripped apart, and any essence of who I am is being viciously torn into shreds. And then needles, millions of needles are stabbing me all over my body and then set on fire.
          
          "Angie, honey..." Cathryn steps one foot forward and stops when I crouch down.
          
          A cold shock goes through my whole body. Starting from the top of my head to the tips of my toes and fingers. I let out a sigh, and the cold is soon replaced with electricity. I dig my nails into the floor; my eyes never leave them...

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Passage from Demons Treasure: The Awakening
          (Ongoing)
          Chapters- 17 (current)
          
          “Before everything in my nightmares dissolved in darkness, there was always a blinding light. And inside it stood a woman in a flowing white dress. Every time I saw her, this overwhelming mix of warmth and sadness hit so hard it almost hurts.
          
          But before I could ever reach her, something always dragged be back.
          
          Cold hands clawed at my arms and legs, pinning me down as fire surrounded me. The heat burning my skin while panic ripped through my chest.
          
          Then came the figure.
          
          Towering over me.
          
          Watching me.
          
          The only thing I could ever make out were its eyes—completely black and empty, like there was nothing alive in them. A grin would spread across its face, and every time, pure terror rooted me in place.
          
          I was staring DEATH in the face.”

Oh, wow,
          Okay I'm so excited so announce what I have been working so hard on.
          
          Demons Treasure has undergone a complete rework!
          I have spent days and weeks on edits and restructuring. Some chapters experienced a complete overhaul. 
          
          I hope you join me on the new discovery of and old favorite story of mine.
          And give me your honest reviews and opinions.
          And thank you so much for your support!

Been editing and improving my book 
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