Robert

@in_the_dark it's not really a loss of basic plot it's I the fact I feel it adds too much and takes away, however, I know it lacks.

If you make a general plot line list and keep your main plots in there, you can change the detail better

@in_the_dark yes I do I have been busy with school as I've been accepted into MTU and I've started working. I have a draft of a story on paper that I've been meaning to perfect but I'm having trouble making changes without disrupting the flow. I should have something in the up coming weeks.

You ever going to start up something new?