Seeker_666

Advise required: Some people close to me has read part of my book, and they gave me advise that instead of chopping my book into series, it's best to just continue it as one full book. Another is that I should put more human-like reactions and emotions to  my characters. Plus, I should add some more romantic scenes instead of dodging them due to my parents wanting to read my book. They are a bit traditional and old-fashioned in their thinking and I was kind of embarassed with them reading my book with either fluff or smut scenes. So I do think I should just re-edit the whole book again and include the deleted 16+ and 18+ parts of my book. What do you all think?

I have finally completed Book 1. I need a well deserved rest before starting my 2nd book.

I will be on vacation with my family and won't be able to continue with editing my book. However, I promise to at least finish them before the month ends as I still have to do a rough outline for the Sequel. 
          
          See you all soon.

Thanks for the follow! I hope you enjoy my books! <3

thank you for the follow!! <3

Hello again everyone. I hope that you are doing well in whatever corner you are in and in what stage of life you are now at. I have created a book, one which I hope will delight my readers. I have only posted 1 chapter, but fret not. For I have already completed the book and am now starting on the sequel.
          
          I do hope everyone enjoys it as well as I do.

Mentos

Hello

Caged and broken. 
          But never afraid. 
          Broke my wings. 
          But I will never fall. 
          Ripped out my fangs. 
          But I will tear you apart. 
          Made my heart frozen. 
          But my passion still burns. 
          Ran away from my cage. 
          But you brought me back. 
          Drowned myself. 
          Yet you fished me back out. 
          And drowned me again. 
          Beaten black and blue.
          But I will never break. 
          I will sharpen my claws. 
          I will sharpen my blades. 
          Till the day come, 
          That the trumpets are heard. 
          I will plunge the knife in your heart. 
          And this time.
          Time. Will not reverse. : )

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