SeleS-SagaS

can someone read my novel, "me and this paranormal world"  I need suggestions on how to make it better?

hello mate! 
          
          do you mind checking out my book, "only you" thank you! much appreciated. x 

Wattpad Admins:DELETE IT! DELEETEEE!!!!!
          Me:NOOOO!!!SLAVE HAREEM!!!
          My little brother:Meeeh~Sooo muuch bad luck

What is wrong with this guys, they keep on deleting your account :(

Again :( 

No more light novels . Im going to write my own novel sorry

Damn them all!!! 

haha its the second time!!!! hahaha.demn he carried too many stories I wanna read yet again and again they deleted his account
          do they hate him or something !??????

They really hate him don't they. 

Shits drop again from the sky. such a bad luck. slave harem has to wait again i guess