GottaLoveThemStories

Heey! Okay, so, here's the thing; I haven't been getting many opinions on my newest story. &Since I'm new on WattPad, I'd love to get feedback on my story while I'm still writing it! So if you wouldn't mind, would you please maybe check out the story &give me some opinions? I'd love a great critique! 
          Here's the link below!
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/2573315-shhhh-chapter-one-happy
          
          Thank you so much, it means the world. Smile, you're beautiful.♥

Muisckeepsmesane

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          Katherine 
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