Vindale
Hi, I hope you're doing well. I wanted to share something with you because I still remember what you told me some time ago, and it honestly motivated me to start writing my own story.
I’ve been working on a novel called “The Villainess Is the Real Female Lead?!” and I would really love to know what you think of the idea and the story so far. Your words played a part in encouraging me to write, so your opinion would mean a lot to me.
I understand you're busy, so no pressure, but if you ever have time to read it, I’d really appreciate your thoughts.
SensitiveMe101
@Vindale I read your story and I’d give Chapter 1 a 7/10 ❤️. I genuinely enjoyed the dramatic premise and Jessica immediately caught my attention. Her situation made me feel frustrated for her, especially seeing how much she sacrifices for someone who doesn't seem to appreciate her. The system and the 100th mission also made me curious about where her story is going and what choice she'll ultimately make. I do think the chapter could benefit from some grammar polishing and a little less exposition, but the emotional potential is definitely there. Most importantly, I wanted to keep reading, which I think is a great sign for a first chapter. ❤️
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