BTS_1Derland
heyyy... I just came by to thank u for ur support and to take ur review on hypnotized. if it won't be a bother would u give me a piece of ur thoughts on the story? I like constructive criticism so feel free to speak freely ❤
Seokjiness
@BTS_1Derland oh sorry about that, I didn’t notice the tag was deleted. And you’re very welcome! Stay safe and healthy! ❤️
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BTS_1Derland
@Seokjiness omg I'm rlly sorry for the late reply! I wasn't tagged so I didn't know u replied, but thank u so much for ur kind words! I'm rlly glad u enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it! Thank u sm for ur support, it means a lot to me ❤❤
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Seokjiness
Heyyy, welcome to my page! I LOVE your book soo much so there honestly won’t be anything you need to improve on as all I’ve got on my head are compliments. Probably not what you’re looking for and I’m terrible at reviews anyway so yeah. For starters, the writing is perfection! It’s all beautifully written. The storyline is mysterious yet still manageable to understand. The distinctive mannerisms of each character have been portrayed in a skilful and clever way that allows the readers to view them however they were presented. You know when you’ve successfully represented the personality they emit when the readers themselves show what effect it gives them: if the character goes through something heartbreaking, they would feel pitiful; if the character acts rude and offensive, they would (probably) want to throw them away in the worst way possible; if the character suddenly becomes more confident in themselves, they would support. I can truly feel those emotions through your piece of writing. I’ll definitely be reading this story till the very end and maybe even reread it after. Thank you for writing a masterpiece and I wish you great luck with the incoming chapters and stories!
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