SeraphicOne

I've been thinking of a Jurassic World x Male OC story, pairing Claire (Bryce Dallas Howard) What do you guys think?

SeraphicOne

Bryce Dallas is so fine ash
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_Marou_

Hiya, I hope you don't take this negatively in anyway. I just noticed you switch writing style often, from script to a more traditional way of writing.
          
          As someone who writes and reads, I'd advise to stick to one style so the readers won't have to adapt their flow of reading to the style currently on the chapter.
          
          You write beautifully with the traditional writing and I'd suggest to stick to it, but you can also stick to the script style. 
          
          Of course I'm not saying to change so suddenly and rework all your previous chapters and books.
          
          I think your story beats are good, and each chapter there's small bits of improvement (specifically referring to your RWBY book).
          
          Again, this is a constructive criticism from a fellow writer and also a reader.
          
          Apologies for the suddenness, I just didn't feel like dropping this as a comment on your recent chapter when I've yet to reach it (currently on ch9 as I write this).
          
          Cheers!

_Marou_

@SeraphicOne keep it up! I'm enjoying the chapters as I read through them!
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SeraphicOne

Yeah my new books are in the traditional way and future Chapters of RWBY will also be like that. Just need to edit the last 2-3 chapters 
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SeraphicOne

I've been thinking of a Jurassic World x Male OC story, pairing Claire (Bryce Dallas Howard) What do you guys think?

SeraphicOne

Bryce Dallas is so fine ash
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SeraphicOne

Volume 3 of White Tiger is done. After a 2-3 weeks of Hiatus, I'll start publishing the remaining Volume 3.5. can't wait for that to drop. Let me know how you what you think about the story till Now 

YourPalDio541

Gotcha! Enjoy your break!
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professorshark1790

I like your white tiger story mate can you do a live story with winter schnee

SeraphicOne

@professorshark1790 I really don't like Winter that much, and I think this will be the only story I'll write
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YourPalDio541

Hey, saw your story and I like it, I think it's pretty well written compared to a lot of other stories haha. You've got a big thumbs up from me as a fellow RWBY writer and Weiss enjoyer. Do you have any tips on getting big?

YourPalDio541

Thanks that'd mean so much to me, don't hesitate to give me feedback on things you enjoyed or didn't!
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SeraphicOne

@YourPalDio541 Oh yeah, I'll defo read it when I have the chance 
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YourPalDio541

Ah fair, I saw that you had a lot of reads so I had to ask. Yeah same I didn't like what a lot had to offer and well I had a lot of different ideas so add on, hey if you could check it out that'd be great! I know the beginning is a bit of a slow burn but necessary to build up the rest.
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HershMaster

hihi!!! I have a question!!!

SeraphicOne

@HershMaster ohh sorry but I gotta decline, im pretty new to this so I want to take time for my story 
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HershMaster

@SeraphicOne I was wondering if you're interested in a potential collad with our two rwby stories 
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